Nelson Central:Pete and sheridan
Panmure Bridge: Deziree and Teina
Narrative Topic: Lost Dog
On Tuesday Shaggy the Dog was looking for his bone. He could smell it. He followed the smell into the bush. Just then he realised he was lost at Mission Bay.
He called for help. A bird said "what's the matter?" "I'm lost! I want to get out of here" said Shaggy. "I know the way back, come with me" said the bird. "Ok, this isn't my house, this is your house" said Shaggy.
"Thank you very much for taking care me" said Shaggy. "I'm cold" said shaggy. "But were do you live?" said the bird. I live at 51 Halifax St. "I am getting cold, get me out of here. Show me the way home" said Shaggy. "Ok come with me to your house" said the bird. "Thank you" said Shaggy and he never went into the bush again.