Wednesday, December 9, 2009
Best thing we did this year
We think swimming was the best thing this year
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Swimming
We loved doing swimming,because because it gave us heaps of energy.
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What we have liked best this year
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We think skipping is the BEST thing we have done this year. We like skipping the best because we get exercise.
We think skipping is the BEST thing we have done this year. We like skipping the best because we get exercise.
at the sanury
This is us at the sanury. It was fun, very very fun.
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swiming
Iv in joyd swiming in the pool because it is a lot of fun!
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we like swimming
At the start of the year we like swimming because it cools us down.
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why we like art
we did art because it is very cool and fun to do and drawing is fun and drawing is also art
and art is great.
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and art is great.
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Messy art
This year we have enjoyed Art because it is fun and messy to.And you dont have to get a pencile.
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great fun paitng
This is our pickture of us paitng a tree it's our favroite thing weve done this year in room 9 it's great fun!
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Sunday, December 6, 2009
The Lost Dog
Names of story authors:
Nelson Central:Pete and sheridan
Panmure Bridge: Deziree and Teina
Nelson Central:Pete and sheridan
Panmure Bridge: Deziree and Teina
Narrative Topic: Lost Dog
On Tuesday Shaggy the Dog was looking for his bone. He could smell it. He followed the smell into the bush. Just then he realised he was lost at Mission Bay.
He called for help. A bird said "what's the matter?" "I'm lost! I want to get out of here" said Shaggy. "I know the way back, come with me" said the bird. "Ok, this isn't my house, this is your house" said Shaggy.
"Thank you very much for taking care me" said Shaggy. "I'm cold" said shaggy. "But were do you live?" said the bird. I live at 51 Halifax St. "I am getting cold, get me out of here. Show me the way home" said Shaggy. "Ok come with me to your house" said the bird. "Thank you" said Shaggy and he never went into the bush again.
The Lost Dog
Names of story authors:
Nelson Central: Eden & Aulay
Panmure Bridge: Ducati & Oh S'mar
Nelson Central: Eden & Aulay
Panmure Bridge: Ducati & Oh S'mar
Narrative Topic: Lost Dog
Once upon a time there was a dog called Spots.
He was a happy little dog. But one day he got lost. He got lost at Mission Bay. When his owner got out of bed to feed him he was not there. His owner searched for Spots all over town. He was not to be found. His Owner was very sad. His owner looked everywhere but he couldn't find him. First his owner looked at the park. But he was not there. So he went to the beach but he still was not there. Finally he looked at Mission Bay behind a big tree. There was Spot! He had gone for a swim and was shaking himself off there. The owner got splattered in water.
Jake gets lost
Names of story authors:
Nelson Central: George N & Denver
Panmure Bridge: Marama & Fine
One day Jake was playing fetch with his owner Ben. Jake was playing until he ripped a hole in his owners jacket accidentally. His collar fell off and he ran away. His dad tried to catch him but he could not! Jake the dog ran into a shop. His height was 22 cm tall.
Nelson Central: George N & Denver
Panmure Bridge: Marama & Fine
One day Jake was playing fetch with his owner Ben. Jake was playing until he ripped a hole in his owners jacket accidentally. His collar fell off and he ran away. His dad tried to catch him but he could not! Jake the dog ran into a shop. His height was 22 cm tall.
Jake realised he was lost! He sniffed and followed the scent of his owner. It led him home. He was very glad to see his owner Ben there looking for him. Jake knew he would never need to worry again, he can just follow his owners scent home.
Tuesday, November 24, 2009
Tuesday, November 3, 2009
Stream study
Yesterday Room 9 went to the Brook sanctuary. We caught heaps of bugs like Mayflies,Stoneflies and Snails.We felt happy because we caught heaps of bugs.
It was AWESOME!
It was AWESOME!
stream study day
On Tuesday room nine went to the brook sanctuary.It was luky because there was no boat men because boat men live in paloted places.It was also good because we caught lots of water bugs like may flies.it was lots of fun.
Room 9s Stream Trip
On Tuesday Room9 Went to the Brook Santuary to Stream Study we went to cach Bugs at the End we put them Backe
stream study
Yesterday room9 went to the brook sanctuary. We caught lots of mayflies and 1 water spider. We rely wont to do it again.
Healthy stream.
Yesterday room 9 went to brook sanctuary we felt happy because there was lots of bugs.
The Brook Sanctury Trip
Yesterday Room 9 drove to the Brook Sanctuary. When we got there Mel told us what we had to do.Charlotte and I caught a dobson fly (toe-nipper). We felt proud of ourselves.
Stream study
We learned that the stream is healthy when you see mayflies and it is bubbly.We felt cold on our feet.We felt exited too.
Tuesday, September 15, 2009
How to switch on the light
You will need :
1x light, 1x light switch and yourself
What to do:
1. Click on the little switch on the light thing on the wall.
2.You are done.
1x light, 1x light switch and yourself
What to do:
1. Click on the little switch on the light thing on the wall.
2.You are done.
How to make a icecream
You will need ice cream a cone a scooper.what to do.1grab a cone
2 get the ice cream from containa
3 put ice cream in the cone.
4eat it.
how to climb up a tree
two pull your self up.
three your done.
How to turn on a light
you will need
a light swich that is connected to a light.
what to do
1.Press the swich
your done!!!
a light swich that is connected to a light.
what to do
1.Press the swich
your done!!!
How to make an ice-cream
You will need:
ice cream cones,scoop,ice cream.
What you need to do:
1.Put some ice cream inside the cone.
2.Push the ice cream down.
3.Eat it,and enjoy.
ice cream cones,scoop,ice cream.
What you need to do:
1.Put some ice cream inside the cone.
2.Push the ice cream down.
3.Eat it,and enjoy.
How to sit on a chair
You will need:
A chair, yourself.
what to do:
1 Move the chair behinde you .
2 Bend you're legs till your bottom tutches the chair.
A chair, yourself.
what to do:
1 Move the chair behinde you .
2 Bend you're legs till your bottom tutches the chair.
how to open a garage
1 take the opener out of your pocket.
2 find the botten that opens the garage.
3press the botton that opens the garage.
2 find the botten that opens the garage.
3press the botton that opens the garage.
How to blow out a canedil
What you need
canedil
breth
What to do:
1 get a canedil
2. light it on fier
3. blow it out
canedil
breth
What to do:
1 get a canedil
2. light it on fier
3. blow it out
How to turn on the light.
1 Move over to the light.
2 Get your finger out.
3 Put your finger on the light swich then swich the light down.
4 Now you know how to turn on the light.
2 Get your finger out.
3 Put your finger on the light swich then swich the light down.
4 Now you know how to turn on the light.
How to make Drums
you will need
4 pots and pans,
2 spoons.
What to do
step 1 spread the pots and pans.
Step 2 peck up the spoons.
Step 3 bang the pots and pans.
4 pots and pans,
2 spoons.
What to do
step 1 spread the pots and pans.
Step 2 peck up the spoons.
Step 3 bang the pots and pans.
Tuesday, September 8, 2009
procedure
A procedure is a piece of instruction we learned that procedure is a nother word for instruction.
How to do a procedure
A procedure Is a piece of writing that it tels people what to do. We learned that procedure alwas has bose langwigj.
Procedure
A Procedure is when you show somebody how to do something.
We learned that a procedure has bossy languge "like put,spread,stir,grab,scroll and read.
We learned that a procedure has bossy languge "like put,spread,stir,grab,scroll and read.
procedure writing
A procedure is something that you tell people to do something in bossy language.I learned how to make a robot how to put up a tent. When you write procedure writing you must not write and
and then.
and then.
Procedure
A procedure is when you show somebody what to do. We learned bossy languge. Like
do this and do that.
do this and do that.
how to make a
1. A pocedure is some instrucshons. It is cool. I learned to use numbers down the side and to use bosey langwigch.
How to make procedure
A procedure is a set of instructions you tell people what to do with bossy langwig.
1. write the title
2. write a list of things you need
3.write what to do
1. write the title
2. write a list of things you need
3.write what to do
how to write a procedure
A procedure is a piece of writing that tells someone what to do.
We learned that a procedure is instructions that tell people what to do.
When you write a procedure you have to you have to use bossy language.
by Aria & Charlotte.
We learned that a procedure is instructions that tell people what to do.
When you write a procedure you have to you have to use bossy language.
by Aria & Charlotte.
procedure
A procedure is a piece of writing that is some instrutions.We learned that a procedure has bossy languge.
Tuesday, June 23, 2009
the choir
On Tuesday night the school choir hade a concert. We sang all ways on my myndand sesons
come and more songs. At the end there was fireworks. We had hot chips with sors.We sang
nine song.Joes sister got penutbuter.
come and more songs. At the end there was fireworks. We had hot chips with sors.We sang
nine song.Joes sister got penutbuter.
Magicool stars consit
Last night the nelson centril choir had a consit.We sang 10 songs. We had hotcips and hot chocolot.
magical stars evening
After school our school choir did a concert.We sang 9 songs.One was always on my mind.We had hot chocolate and hot chips.At the end there were fire works and raffle
prizes.
prizes.
Tuesday, April 7, 2009
Term 1
My favourite thing we have done this term has been learning about our responsibilities at home and at school.
Tuesday, March 31, 2009
life edjercashion
Today room9 went to life edjercashion whith cool putpits we had to find out ther name.
Harold
Today Room 9 went to see Harold . We all had a paupit I had a kewey and Denver had a baby chekin
Tuesday, March 24, 2009
Ellie
My name is Ellie.I am in room 9. My friend is called Sophie. I am 6 years old. I love waching movies and playing sylvanians with my sister.I ive in Nelson
Ella
My name is Ella. I leve In Nasoen. I go to Nasoen cetrol school. I wosyto have a Dog kold finn. i am6 yer old
Rachel
My name is Rachel. I am the teacher of Room 9. I am 21 years old. I like watching movies and going to see my friends. I live in Richmond.
Thursday, March 19, 2009
Welcome!
Welcome to the WRITING SPOT of
Room 9 @ Nelson Central School.
Room 9 @ Nelson Central School.
This blog is written independently by Room 9 students.
It is a special spot where they can express themselves freely.
It is a special spot where they can express themselves freely.
Each day, following a roster, a child will post their independent writing here; they will do their best with spelling/punctuation/grammar etc.... but it will not be corrected (unless the meaning is not clear). This way you see the writing exactly as the child intended. The writing will generally be on a topic of the child's choice.
We are learning to write independently and to express ourselves freely.
Hopefully you will be able to see a huge improvement over the year with your child's writing!
Kind regards, Rachel
PS: Our class blog is still here at: room9nelsoncentral2009.blogspot.com
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