Wednesday, December 9, 2009
Sunday, December 6, 2009
Nelson Central:Pete and sheridan
Panmure Bridge: Deziree and Teina
Narrative Topic: Lost Dog
On Tuesday Shaggy the Dog was looking for his bone. He could smell it. He followed the smell into the bush. Just then he realised he was lost at Mission Bay.
He called for help. A bird said "what's the matter?" "I'm lost! I want to get out of here" said Shaggy. "I know the way back, come with me" said the bird. "Ok, this isn't my house, this is your house" said Shaggy.
"Thank you very much for taking care me" said Shaggy. "I'm cold" said shaggy. "But were do you live?" said the bird. I live at 51 Halifax St. "I am getting cold, get me out of here. Show me the way home" said Shaggy. "Ok come with me to your house" said the bird. "Thank you" said Shaggy and he never went into the bush again.
Nelson Central: Eden & Aulay
Panmure Bridge: Ducati & Oh S'mar
Narrative Topic: Lost Dog
Once upon a time there was a dog called Spots.
He was a happy little dog. But one day he got lost. He got lost at Mission Bay. When his owner got out of bed to feed him he was not there. His owner searched for Spots all over town. He was not to be found. His Owner was very sad. His owner looked everywhere but he couldn't find him. First his owner looked at the park. But he was not there. So he went to the beach but he still was not there. Finally he looked at Mission Bay behind a big tree. There was Spot! He had gone for a swim and was shaking himself off there. The owner got splattered in water.
Nelson Central: George N & Denver
Panmure Bridge: Marama & Fine
One day Jake was playing fetch with his owner Ben. Jake was playing until he ripped a hole in his owners jacket accidentally. His collar fell off and he ran away. His dad tried to catch him but he could not! Jake the dog ran into a shop. His height was 22 cm tall.
Jake realised he was lost! He sniffed and followed the scent of his owner. It led him home. He was very glad to see his owner Ben there looking for him. Jake knew he would never need to worry again, he can just follow his owners scent home.
Tuesday, November 24, 2009
Tuesday, November 3, 2009
Tuesday, September 15, 2009
Tuesday, September 8, 2009
We learned that a procedure is instructions that tell people what to do.
When you write a procedure you have to you have to use bossy language.
by Aria & Charlotte.
Tuesday, June 23, 2009
Tuesday, April 7, 2009
Tuesday, March 31, 2009
Tuesday, March 24, 2009
Thursday, March 19, 2009
Room 9 @ Nelson Central School.
It is a special spot where they can express themselves freely.
Each day, following a roster, a child will post their independent writing here; they will do their best with spelling/punctuation/grammar etc.... but it will not be corrected (unless the meaning is not clear). This way you see the writing exactly as the child intended. The writing will generally be on a topic of the child's choice.
We are learning to write independently and to express ourselves freely.
Hopefully you will be able to see a huge improvement over the year with your child's writing!
Kind regards, Rachel
PS: Our class blog is still here at: room9nelsoncentral2009.blogspot.com